Here it is… Bread Loaf Rejection #3

This is a rejection for the Work-Study in Fiction.  I did not apply for a regular spot, though I am curious as to whether I would have even been accepted that way either. But it seems dishonest to apply for a spot knowing that I would not go if I were accepted.  Why?  Because I don’t have the money.  It is too expensive.  Then you wonder how these other people can afford it.  But maybe they don’t have two kids, aren’t living in a single-income household.

Here it is, no “you were close” no “you were in the final round” no “we liked your work.”  Just a flat out, generic response, but at least my name was copied into it:

Dear Annam Manthiram:

 

I am sorry to let you know that we are unable to offer you a Work-study Scholarship in Fiction for the 2013 Bread Loaf Writers’ Conference.

 

Each year we receive applications from many more writers than we can invite. To give you an idea of the competitiveness of this year’s applicant pool, we were able to offer an award to 5 percent of those who applied for financial aid, and we were able to invite 19 percent of those who applied as general contributors.

 

We greatly appreciate your interest in the Conference and truly wish we could host all of the deserving writers who apply.

 

I wish you luck with your work and hope to meet you another time.

 

Sincerely,

 

Noreen Cargill

Administrative Manager

Bread Loaf Writers’ Conference

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A Challenge

I’ve taken some time away from the novel.  It’s like having a relationship.  Sometimes you need a break.

My goal is to finish the novel, work to death on revision, and then see what happens.  I can’t whine and complain if I don’t give it my all.  It’s a challenge that I have taken upon myself.  I want to make it as good as possible.  The best it can be, and then there may be some more decisions to make after that.

Writing isn’t for those looking for instant gratification.  It’s a slow burn, sometimes painful, sometimes pleasurable.

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No, No, and No… and a Decision

I know it’s been two months, but I have a baby.  That makes it hard.  I’ve been lucky if I get 15 minutes a day to write.

No from the Deming Memorial Fund, I did not get a grant from them to fund my short story collection dealing with identity among Indian-American women

No from Word Riot, I did not get a small travel grant to fund my three-city reading tour of New Mexico’s rural communities (though my husband and I are talking about just doing it anyway– we don’t need validation from anyone that our project is worthy)

There was another No, but I can’t remember now what that was from.  I am anxiously awaiting a No from Bread Loaf too.  Pessimistic?  Nah, realistic.

My reading at Bookworks back in March went well.  It was a multimedia presentation, and people seemed interested.  So I will have to do that again when/if I do another reading for the book.  It’s been hard to get motivated when there is a tremendous amount of energy/effort/preparation that goes into these things with very little return. It’s not about the money.

I spent the last three days, almost 10 hour days, at the first ever Southwest Book Fiesta.  It was a disaster, to put it mildly.  They were charging people admission fees to come and buy books.  I don’t know whose idea that was.  And so as a result, there were not many people there.  That was just one of the myriad issues.  I won’t bore you.  Needless to say, I sold very VERY few books.  The bright side– the panel I did with Eirik about getting published in literary journals went well.  It was the first time I’ve done something like that, and I felt relaxed and my normally goofy self.  It was informative, and people afterward said they learned quite a bit.  We are going to branch out and contact libraries/bookstores to offer this presentation elsewhere.  I also read a short story as part of the Dimestories event on the main stage.  I did sell a few books afterward, so that was good.

My kids were such troopers.  They were dragged around by my husband for three days, but it was only on the third day that my oldest had a meltdown.  But we were constantly getting people coming over to tell us how well-behaved our children were.  I’m glad.  They are good kids.  I love them so much even though they piss me off most of the time.  And Sheryl Sandberg is right.  Having a partner who is invested in you and the marriage is so crucial to women who are wanting a career.  If my husband weren’t so supportive, I don’t think I would be able to do as much as I do.  Thanks is not justice enough.  I love him so much even though he pisses me off sometimes too (haha).

I’m going to end on a sour note, which is not great.  I have a few minutes (oldest is playing in his room, youngest is napping), and this is usually when I’d take the 15 – 30 minutes I might have to write, but instead I am writing on my blog because, well, I’ve sort of become disillusioned.  Is it worth it?  All the effort?  The sacrifice, not only that I make, but my husband, my children?  Wouldn’t it just be easier to say fuck it, I won’t write anymore, and just have that part of my life just go away?  I know we all go through these ups and downs, but it’s hard when a large part of your stress is scrambling for time, and if that stress went away, how light you would feel….how much time I would have to spend with my family, to spend with friends instead of isolated in an office that is tiny and cramped with crap that we have nowhere else to store…

For now I am updating my blog and seeing what happens.

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The Nose

Last Sunday I participated in Dimestories’ Third Annual Showcase event at Bookworks, the local independent bookseller in Albuquerque where I’ll be doing my launch.  It’s a tiny space, and it was packed (standing room only).  I read “A Binturong Named Vithi” about an imaginary friend who turns out to be not-so-imaginary after all.  Paul, I did not wear my lucky boots!  And I read fine, so I guess I don’t need them, which is good because I think they have a hole in them now.

It’s funny no matter how many times I do this I still get nervous right up until I read my first word. Then it’s like this amazing rush, and you want to keep reading and reading.

Besides my novel-in-progress (up to 250 pages now), I am working on a story for Pen Parentis (of which I placed third last year) and submitting to The Writer’s Center Emerging Writer Fellowship. Last weekend I was also invited to speak to high school students about writing and workshop.  It was on a Saturday and a very nice day, so we did not get much participation.  But between me and the other writers at the table, there was a synergy I miss when I work by myself.  We talked craft and technique, and I learned a few things.  I suppose that’s why I must try to make it to another conference at some point.

My youngest turns five months old today.  Yay!  He is already into reading– loves the board books I get him from the library, so I am excited that he may be another reader just like my oldest one.  Sathya (the oldest) is proving to be sophisticated when it comes to his selections.  We picked up a book called “The Nose,” which was adapted for children and based on the short story by Nikolai Gogol.  That was one of his favorites before I had to return it back to the library.  I am not sure he understand all of the metaphors, but I could tell there was something about the story that piqued his interest.

 

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The clock is ticking…

I have a measly 4 1/2 weeks until my first reading.  Yikes!  The slideshow’s been assembled, but I haven’t had much time to do a read-through.  I felt so much more prepared with readings for my novel.  This time around I feel lucky if I can write for five minutes.  Last night after my son went to sleep I sat in the bedroom with the lights off working feverishly on revising Amit’s Ability.  I don’t know if these late-night work sessions produce anything tangible, but we’ll see.

Lately I’ve been kind of obsessed with Goodreads.  I can’t believe I didn’t get into it before.  It’s really such a cool resource for people who love to read.  I’m generally not someone who enjoys adding yet another “technological advance” to her repertoire, but this one is definitely worth the time.

Sathya is continuing to read his books.  He is reading labels now; the other day he figured out that the salsa was “hot.”  Anand has passed his teething phase (for now), and he is sleeping better.  For about a week and a half it felt like we were taking care of a newborn again.  Poor red, gummy thing.

I’ve opened a rogue Twitter account, the handle of which I will not reveal here.  It’s meant to be anonymous, so I can really post what I really really mean and feel (haha).  It’s liberating.  Self-censorship lives.

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My son’s reading!

My oldest Sathya just turned four.  And he is reading already. This morning he read a story about Ned and his tan cat that likes to eat ham.  I’d like to think it’s because I infused him with a love of words, but I don’t know how much credit I can take.  He is such a bright child.  It makes him staying home instead and driving me nuts of going to preschool  (and not giving me any time to work) worthwhile.

My youngest Anand is a dream child.  He is so happy, so mellow, so easy.  I have heard that about second children.  He is also a smart baby.  He focuses really hard when we read him books, and he is already grabbing at the pages.  I am thankful because I don’t know what I’d do if I had two crazy animals to contend with!

My writing schedule though erratic is at least consistent.  I’ve given up trying to do anything constructive during the day.  The oldest is kept to a schedule of learning, activities, and play, so there is not much time for me to work. He also refuses to take a nap, so even when the baby is down, the oldest is wide awake and ready for stimulation.  When my husband gets home, we make sure to all eat dinner together, and then I run upstairs to get in at least an hour (if that) of writing done before I have to feed the younger one.  Then it’s getting the kids to bed.  Sometimes I will go back to work if I am not too tired.  (I have been known to get up in the middle of the night to write.) Anand is still waking at least twice at night for feedings, so I try to avoid cutting into my sleep too much.  I am hopeful that once he starts sleeping through the night, I will be able to work after the kids go to bed.

My husband and I have learned how to communicate in short sentences.  Articles and adjectives take up too much time.  Nouns and verbs only.  It’s temporary, we know, which makes this odd time bearable.

I am about 100 pages into the revision of my novel, Amit’s Ability.  I really like where it’s going.  You know you’ve hit your stride when you can feel somewhat good about what you are writing.  I think having another child and having even less time have forced me to be more focused and more appreciative of the time I do have.

I have less than 7 weeks before my first reading for Dysfunction.  I am not planning nearly as hectic of a schedule of readings like I did with After the Tsunami.  But I do plan on visiting California again and doing a reading or two.  I am doing something different this time, too.  I am putting together a slideshow to accompany the reading.  I hope it will create a bit more visual interest and engage readers even more.

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Getting a Less-Than-Awesome Publishers Weekly Review

With my second book (Dysfunction), I have received my first ever real Publishers Weekly Review.  It is not pretty.  It’s like receiving a back-handed comment– with every little bit of praise comes a sharp dagger of criticism.  My favorite was “Generally, though, the stories are too clever, as though they were lifted from the notebook of a young creative writing student who’s trying to show everyone how smart she is.”  Yikes!  I mean, Kavita Daswani read my book and liked it.  So did Susan Straight.  Most of the stories have been published in reputable literary journals. I guess those journals must like the ramblings of a precocious student.

I liked this article by Emily St. John Mandel about bad reviews.  She says that “after fifteen years on the Internet I have a hard time taking anonymous snark very seriously.”  Yes.  I suppose writing bad reviews can be a dangerous profession given how unstable and uneven writers can be.  Still, like she says in her article, bad reviews still bite.  And it sucks.

The publisher and I decided we could pull one line from it– “Beginning with “The Cottonwood Borer”, a compact and powerful story told by a young girl about her mother’s desire to be reincarnated as a as the titular figure, each story examines wildly different characters, from a young Indian girl who can’t live up to her parents standards in “Asha Ma”, to a lonely woman who buys storage units hoping to find emotional satisfaction in their unknown contents in “Whatcha Bid”. The stories are most successful when they are at their darkest, displaying allegorical brilliance on the scale of a Sanskrit epic.”  I do take a little offense to this though.  Why must my work be related to a “Sanskrit epic”?  Is it because I am Indian?  I think that one should never go into reading a person’s work with certain expectations on canon based on the writer’s cultural background.

We also agree that the reviewer most definitely did not read the entire collection. Asha Ma for example is not a story about a girl living up to her parents’ expectations… but it is if you just read the first page. And the best stories weren’t even mentioned.

There are options to the bad review, apparently.  You can pay to get your book reviewed and then have it removed if you don’t  like it.

And then even Publishers Weekly itself posts the top 13 Worst Reviews of Classic Books, admitting that not all reviews are created equal!

So the real question is this: will people will be intrigued by this offensive review and wonder… just how smart is this creative writing student?

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The Next Big Thing – What I’m Working On NOW

Cynthia Reeser, writer and publisher of Aqueous Books (which just published my short story collection, Dysfunction), was kind enough to invite me to participate in the Next Big Thing blog post where writers tag you to write about your current projects, then you tag more writers, and the tagging goes on and on and on.  It is a way to promote your own work as well as the work of other writers you know and admire.  Thanks, Cynthia!

Here are the ten questions:

1. What is your working title of your book (or story)? Amit’s Ability (a novel)

2. Where did the idea come from for the book? Originally the idea came from a screenwriting class that I was taking in graduate school at USC.  One of the assignments was to put together a short scene or two (more like a treatment), and I thought: how cool would it be to write about an Indian superhero?  Though the story has changed dramatically since then, the concept remains the same (and I am sticking to what I know best– fiction, NOT screenplays!).

3. What genre does your book fall under? Literary fiction

4. Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition? Kal Penn (as the lead), Philip Seymour Hoffman, Irffan Khan.  There are many more characters in my novel, but I haven’t identified the actors yet.

5. What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book? Amit’s Ability tells the story of Amit Shankar, an Indian man with superhero abilities, who struggles to uncover the purpose of these abilities.

6. Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency? The work is in-progress.

7. How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript? It took about two years to get down a first draft, but it has gone through a major revision since.  It will probably take a few more years before it’s ready to be seen by anyone (except my husband, probably).

8. What other books would you compare this story to within your genre? It pays homage to Aimee Bender.  I was also inspired by Ali Shaw’s The Girl with Glass Feet.

9. Who or what inspired you to write this book? There is a dearth of literature that combines the Indian literary canon and fantasy/the supernatural.  It was a challenge to myself to see if I could do it– create this hybrid form– and to have some fun with it.  This is completely unlike anything I’ve ever written, and I am having a really awesome time with it.

10. What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest? The heart of the novel (no pun intended!) is really just a love story.  But isn’t every story a love story?

Now, to pass the torch on to other writers….

Janet Freeman, a good friend whom I met here in New Mexico (before she abandoned us for Colorado, how dare she?!), author of the chapbook A Man Worthy of Your Attention (RopeWalk Press, 2012), and the type of writer you would want to go out and have a beer with;

Phiroozeh Romer, a beautiful writer whom I met during my time at the Squaw Valley Writers Conference in 2010.  I know when she publishes her first book, it is going to be outstanding.  I cannot wait; and

Eirik Gumeny, author of the Exponential Apocalypse series, co-author of Screw the Universe, founding/former editor of Jersey Devil Press, and a folder of origami cranes (so he says, but I have yet to see this).  He and his wife are very close friends of mine and of my son who seems to prefer thirty-somethings as playmates instead of kids his own age.

People are busy, it’s post-holidays, many don’t have blogs anymore… I couldn’t get more than three writers with such short notice, but look for these writers to post about their “Next Big Thing” the week of Jan 18th!  Thanks!

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Twitter account!

I finally opened a Twitter account. I have no idea how to use it (yet).  I am such a fossil.  But for those who are interested, my account is @AManthiram

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A Long Delay…

Just a few updates on what has been going on:

1. I’m applying for an NEA grant…again. I know it’s a long shot, but I told my husband that I am saving all of the rejection letters because someday (maybe when I’m 70), I will get an NEA grant.  Someday.

2. I recently applied for a grant from the Barbara Deming Memorial Fund to help me pay for some childcare costs, so that I can work on another short story collection about Indian-American identity. Right now, I am taking care of two children (gasp!) AND trying to get work done.  It’s not easy.  Once my husband returns to work full time (which he has already), the plan is to work in the evenings once he gets home.  My oldest doesn’t start kindergarten for another year and a half, and preschool is just too expensive.  So I have a year and a half of late-night writing sessions.  Whatever it takes, right?

3. Aqueous Books and I are wrapping up the final details of the short story collection.  So far it has received two glowing reviews: one from ForeWord and the other from Fiction Writers Review.

4. I am contemplating applying for admission to the Taos Writers Conference on a scholarship.  My youngest will not quite be one yet.  We shall see.

5. I am still submitting stories, albeit very slowly. I have been receiving less rejections, but more personalized rejections. I got a very nice one from Versal.  They were happy I submitted again. My story was considered, but they were not pleased with the resolution.  I will wait again next year.

Happy New Year!  I am excited about 2013.  A new book for me, a new child to tote along to readings, and new writing to be done!!

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